Dedicated
to keep his keen eyes open
to protect his fellow townspeople
from the wraiths and frights that linger the air.
He was
Committed
to keeping people in check
barking out orders
making sure they were heard.
Valiant
were his efforts.
Courage
was his middle name.
Most importantly he was
Proud
Proud
to be the one everyone knew
everyone loved.
Unfortunately
he couldn't be understood.
Let me tell you
that was some dog.
I liked how you put the virtues in one line: dedicated, valiant, and courage, made the words stand out.
ReplyDeleteAt first I thought you were describing a person only to learn it was an ode to beloved dog. The poem was easy to read and had a nice flow.
ReplyDeleteCole,
ReplyDeleteI like the element of surprise you created in this poem. I have to admit that it took me a moment to realize you were talking about a dog -- at first, I thought you were making a humorous but random comment about how the sheriff couldn't be understood.
It could be read both ways, though. ... and that is the mark of a good poem - versatility.
Nicely done.